Dear Paula ii

Berlin

Senior Lister
After a minute or two, I left my seat and stalked over to her seat. Already her table was engaged in a series of back pats in well deserved adoration for the lovely song.

I gently intruded on their party with a courteous 'good evening' paired with a genuine smile. The three ladies turned to look at me, I could feel their gaze measure me far more accurately than my grizzly old yet unbelievably precise tailor.
I introduced myself after I saw the apparent apprehensiveness melt like morning dew, then I paid my compliments to their dashing looks and more so to the lady of the hour. To which they accepted graciously and muttered something about my cardigan and tie so late in the night.
In short I let it known that I fancied a word or two with their talented friend, with a laugh she asked me where I was sitted and assured me she would join me in a few.
I took my leave and went back to my seat, tapped a new cigarette out of the packet and waited for the aftermath.
After a while I decided I had struck out and requested the bartender for an ashtray while I lit the cigarette stuck between my lips.
As I brought the flame closer to the tip of the cigarette she leaned in and blew the flame off, I turned and found my interest gazing me squarely in my eyes with a lazy smile plastered on her lips. I wasn't sure if she was teasing me or she detested the smell of smoke but I was inclined to indulge her.
Upclose her beauty was captivating and the longer we talked the deeper I liked her intellect and mastery of content in classical mythology, I had never met anyone quite like her in my life.
The cretin in me bayed to spread her thighs like the gospel, but the sensible Berlin adviced against such hair brained ideas. After a while a friend of hers came to the bar and jokingly asked me to return the favor by releasing their friend.
How could I not acquiesce, so we exchanged contacts and I promised to be in touch.
I was rather surprised when Paula swooped in and pecked me on the cheek, her cologne was beyond heavenly and I felt a little light headed.
By the time I got my wits about me my packet of cigarettes was gone and so was the unlit one, I knew she had taken them though I didn't care at the moment.
As the music switched to blues I was in a hazy state of mind, picturing every moment with that demi goddess and alive with desire.
I looked at my phone and at her saved number and smiled in anticipation of meeting this beautiful soul.
 
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Abba

Elder Lister
By the time I got my wits about me my packet of cigarettes was gone and so was the unlit one, I knew she had taken them though I didn't care at the moment.
That's a sweet damsel.she took paxk of cigarette so that you quit smoking or she took it to smoke it? That woman knows what she is doing. Nice read sir
 

Berlin

Senior Lister
Your hekaya sounds OK, but why are you adding unnecessary words like you are writing a composition to be marked?

Sema tu I wanted to screw her. Much simpler bila kutafuta dictionary.
Not unnecessary, it's rhetoric and I want to appeal to the finer qualities of readers.

She must have known that tobacco and threshold don't go together.
Paula will definitely explain her games in episode iii, I hope to keep your patronage

That's a sweet damsel.she took paxk of cigarette so that you quit smoking or she took it to smoke it? That woman knows what she is doing. Nice read sir
she studies ancient philosophies, she knows the essence of nature is duality.
Thank you for the appreciation sir
 

Abba

Elder Lister
She must have known that tobacco and threshold don't go together.
Reminds me many many years ago when I was a bachelor, i used to have one my favorite trousers-bell bottom . It was torn but I still loved it anyway.

I came looking for it one day and it was missing. Came to discover that one of my ladies of that time threw it away to protect me from embarrassment after she discovered a funny nickname my friends gave me juu ya hiyo trousers.

When burning takataka months later I saw it carefully hidden in a black plastic wrapping. Till today I didn't know who did it.
 

Abba

Elder Lister
Do you have any other complete hekaya somewhere since you seem to enjoy writing more than the end result.
It's called suspense friend. Makes you yearn for more. It's a writing style. I wrote once hekaya of such style huko misri but because of creating a mammoth suspense to know how it ended, I was verbally abused by some of my fans, some of them are here.
 

Berlin

Senior Lister
It's called suspense friend. Makes you yearn for more. It's a writing style. I wrote once hekaya of such style huko misri but because of creating a mammoth suspense to know how it ended, I was verbally abused by some of my fans, some of them are here.
It's a testament to how lethal your style is


Reminds me many many years ago when I was a bachelor, i used to have one my favorite trousers-bell bottom . It was torn but I still loved it anyway.

I came looking for it one day and it was missing. Came to discover that one of my ladies of that time threw it away to protect me from embarrassment after she discovered a funny nickname my friends gave me juu ya hiyo trousers.

When burning takataka months later I saw it carefully hidden in a black plastic wrapping. Till today I didn't know who did it.
Probably the one who cared the most for you, I'm sure you have your own suspicions.
 

Meria

Elder Lister
Staff member
It's called suspense friend. Makes you yearn for more. It's a writing style. I wrote once hekaya of such style huko misri but because of creating a mammoth suspense to know how it ended, I was verbally abused by some of my fans, some of them are here.
dont let them put you down, in this streets you need a thick skin.
@Berlin we waiting.
btw, did you pinch your handle from the money heist?
 

Aviator

Elder Lister
What was it about, the net isn't very clear about it

Start here.
 

It's Me Scumbag

Elder Lister
You had the hots for a thief...hizo nuances zingine wanaleta are just to make you feel good.
Despite earlier misgiving,juu ya kutuwekea hekaya nusunusu,I want to find out what you did to the Dunhill thief...
 
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